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May and Max's Tickle Fight

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As May continued her walk through the forest, her mind kept thinking back to her earlier experience with Drew and how much fun she had.
After walking for what felt like 45 minutes, she decided that she should sit down and rest for a while.
She sat down in front of a large tree and straightened out her legs in front of her.
After doing so, she looked at her shoes and started rocking her feet back and forth. While doing so, she once again thought back to Drew and what they did earlier today.
"I sure hope we meet again sometime, we sure did have a lot of fun today," said May, still staring at her feet. "You know," said May as she shifted her attention to the sky, "today kinda reminds me of that day a few years ago. Ah yes, I remember it like it was only yesterday."
As May continued to look toward the sky, her mind drifted into a flashback.

It was a few years ago. May was sitting on a recliner chair in her family's living room, watching her favorite show on tv with her socked feet propped up. After the show was over, May started to feel sleepy. She yawned as she stretched and quickly fell asleep.
About a half hour afterward, she began to feel a tickling sensation on her feet, causing her to start giggling.
After waking up, she saw her brother, Max, knelt in front of her now bare feet with her ankles tied down to the foot rest with a jump rope.
"Mahahahahahax, what are you dohoohoohooing?" laughed May.
"Sorry sis," said Max with a sly smile, "but it seemed like the perfect opportunity to have a little fun with you."
"Mahahahahax, cut it ouhahahahout! You know I'm ticklihehehehish!" laughed May.
"I know! That's why it's so much fun. Besides, it's not often that I get to see your bare feet. More or less tickle them," replied Max.
"After all," said Max, now shifting his attention to her toes, "these cute toes of yours deserve a lot of attention."
After teasingly wiggling his fingers once more, he brought them to her toes, giving every last one a good tickling.
"Pleheeheeheese Max, nohahahot my tohohohohoes!" laughed May as she started wiggling them.
"Awww! Why not? Can't I tickle these little spoinks a bit longer?" said Max teasingly as he started playing with them.
"Max pleheeheeheeheese! No mohohohore! Ahahahahahahahaha!" laughed May, her eyes flooding with tears.
"Hmmm… I'll think about it," said Max slyly.
After another minute, Max drew his fingers away.
"O.K, I think that'll do for now," said Max as he untied May's ankles and watched her breath heavily.
After a couple seconds of heavy breathing, May looked to Max and said, "Not bad Max, you caught me off guard. That's a good quality for a pokémon trainer."
"But, there is something I have to point out though," said May as she got off the chair.
"And what's that?" asked Max.
Suddenly, May tackled Max and brought him to the floor. As Max landed on his back, May got on top of him, spreading her legs so that they held down his forearms.
"You shouldn't let your guard down as well," said May slyly as she looked at Max's already bare feet, "Now, it's my turn."
After teasingly wiggling her fingers in Max's view, she brought them to the soles of his feet.
"Hahahahahahaha! Hey, no fahahahahahair! You can't do thahahahat!" laughed Max.
"Sorry Max, but I'm not gonna let you be the only one to have fun doing this. I'm gonna enjoy tickling these little feet of yours," said May with a huge grin.
"Seriously May, I'm toohoohoo ticklihehehehish!" laughed Max.
"Indeed you are," said May teasingly.
"By the way," said May as she grabbed two toes on Max's right foot, "got your toesies!"
As she started wiggling and tickling them, Max's laughter got even louder.
"Come on Mahehehey, I've had enouhuhuhuhugh!" laughed Max.
"Awww… can't I keep going just a little longer. It's just so adorable how tiny these toes are, and ticklish too. I don't wanna stop," said May teasingly.
Another couple seconds later, their mom, Caroline, walked into the room to see what all the laughing was about. As soon as she saw what was going on, she couldn't help laughing herself.
"Well, looks like you two are having fun," Caroline remarked.
May stopped tickling and she and Max shifted their attentions toward her.
"Sure are," replied May happily, "just returning a little favor Max did for me earlier."
"Yep, and I'd say we're even. So could you please get off me," said Max in an annoyed tone.
As May was doing so, Caroline began laughing once again at how cute this was to her.
"I'm glad to see you two playing together like this. But play nice now, O.K?" said Caroline.
"Don't worry, we were just having a little harmless fun," replied May.
"Yeah, we were just having a little tickle fight," replied Max.
"In fact," said Max slyly as he looked toward May.
She looked at him and smiled slyly too.
"Get mommy!" they both yelled before charging toward their mother.
"Oh dear, noooo!" yelled Caroline jokingly as she laid down on the floor and let her two children take positions on top of her.
May and Max each grasped one of Caroline's sandals and removed them from her feet.
"Get ready mommy!" yelled May before she and Max began tickling their mother's soles.
"Ahahahahahaha! Oh no, I'm being tickled! Someone sahahahahave me!" laughed Caroline teasingly.
"Wow, you sure are ticklish, aren't you mommy?" said May teasingly.
"I'd say she is," replied Max, "let's keep it up."
After continuing onward for another minute, the two kids shifted their attention to their mother's toes.
"Now, get mommy's toes!" yelled May triumphantly as she and Max tickled and wiggled them.
"Oh nohohohoho! My poor toesies. Whatever will I do now?" laughed Caroline.
She then used her right arm to collect and hold down May and Max's ankles on her chest.
"I think I know!" said Caroline teasingly.
With her left hand, she began tickling all over both May and Max's feet.
May and Max began to break out in laughter as well.
Caroline giggled a bit and said, "I've almost forgotten how ticklish you two were. Especially you May, you always had the most ticklish feet and toes I had ever seen. I can remember back when you two were younger and I would always play "this little swinub" with your toes," said Caroline happily as she started playing with all twenty toes in front of her.
"Mommy pleheeheeheese, it tickles too muhuhuhuch!" laughed May.
"Yeheheheheah, let's call it a truhoohoohoohoose!" laughed Max.
"Fine by me," said Caroline.
The three ceased tickling and returned to their feet.
"Wow, it's been a while since we had that kind of fun, hasn't it?" said Caroline happily.
"Yeah!" said May, "let's get daddy next."
"Heh heh heh, sounds good to me," said Max.
"Alright then! When dad gets back home, I'll be sure to lead him into our little trap," said Caroline slyly.
"Yay!" yelled May and Max simultaneously before rushing into their mother's arms and joining in on a big group hug.

May looked down on the scenery around her as her flashback came to a conclusion.
"Yeah, good times!" said May happily.
"Well, I feel better now, so I think I'll continue onward," said May as she rose to her feet.
After walking only a few steps though, she stopped and looked down at her shoes.
"Ah, why not?" said May happily before reaching down to her feet.
She untied her shoes, slipped off her shoes and socks, and continued walking onward barefoot.

The End
May having a flashback to a tickle fight she, her brother, and mother had a few years back.

This is my entry for the #A-F-F-Z contest.

May, Drew, Max, and Caroline are characters of the Pokémon anime, and thus, belong to The Pokémon Company.
Swinub and Spoink belong to The Pokémon Company.
© 2011 - 2024 GC254
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EdwardKenway666's avatar
I can't find the original story that this one was based from...
I've read them, but I can't find them now...
I hope you didn't delete them... If not can you give me a link to them, if it's not too much trouble